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Play in the City 2013
Welcome to the on-line conversation for Play in the City, an Emily Balch Seminar offered in Fall 2013 @ Bryn Mawr College, in which we are addressing the question of how we construct, experience, and learn in the act of play. How is play both structured by the environment in which it occurs, and how might it re-structure that space, unsettling and re-drawing the frame in which it is performed? This is an interestingly different kind of place for writing, and may take some getting used to. The first thing to keep in mind is that it's not a site for "formal writing" or "finished thoughts." It's a place for thoughts-in-progress, for what you're thinking (whether you know it or not) on your way to what you think next. Imagine that you're just talking to some people you've met. This is a "conversation" place, a place to find out what you're thinking yourself, and what other people are thinking. The idea here is that your "thoughts in progress" can help others with their thinking, and theirs can help you with yours. |
Who are you writing for? Primarily for yourself, and for others in our course. But also for the world. This is a "public" forum, so people anywhere on the web might look in. You're writing for yourself, for others in the class, AND for others you might or might not know. So, your thoughts in progress can contribute to the thoughts in progress of LOTS of people. The web is giving increasing reality to the idea that there can actually evolve a world community, and you're part of helping to bring that about. We're glad to have you along, and hope you come to both enjoy and value our shared explorations. Feel free to comment on any post below, or to POST YOUR THOUGHTS HERE.
From the Point of the Tiny Insanity-Inspiring Chambers
It started out as an attempt to reform individuals but even now the corruption and evolution of corruption is visible in the empty space. No matter, Eastern State as it is now, a true institution of learning, is the best form of itself that has ever been and undoubtedly could ever be. Communication can’t be stopped.
Eastern State Penitentiary - Quilt essay
Eastern State Penitentiary was an innovative attempt at changing the very hearts of prisoners, but which failed to take into account the role of kindness. The idea of reforming prisoners rather than just looking them up was revolutionary and enlightening, even though it tended not to work in the practices Eastern State used. It should work cause the nature of human beings is kindness, so as long as they stay alone and contemplate, they will eventually find the way to their true heart. Eastern state penitentiary was for the most part a failure: prisoners found ways to communicate and rebel, and often played or refused the help of their reformers. I am disappointed by the loss of the original mission statement (now they lost the part about isolation), but proud of how it affected other prisons throughout the world.
Eastern State
A place of aesthetic beauty from outside. Everyone has some good in them and given the opportunity to reflect on their wrong doings in the penitentiary they could rediscover the good. No cruel punishment so as not to make them feel hated or unaccepted by the society, so that they could return to the society and be decent citizens.
Is it practical?
A place of silence and regret from inside. Eastern State Penitentiary now looks the way it made the prisoners feel: empty, broken, and alone. For prisoners inside, it’s not much different: no freedom, isolated, frustrating, desperate and somehow made the lonely people more aggressive. The isolation is the punishment actually in this place. I cannot imagine if I stay in such place day by day without talking. It seems prisoners became more like objects to be placed somewhere than people who needed reforming.
Reading Eastern State
Solitary confinement was not a situation to be accepted without a fight. Eastern State Penitentiary was an innovative attempt at changing the very hearts of prisoners, but which failed to take into account the role of kindness. The idea of reforming prisoners rather than just looking them up was revolutionary and enlightening, even though it tended not to work in the practices Eastern State used.
The cell is cold and a little bit smelly. I am afraid and do not want to stay any longer at all. The grey walls around me make me feel lonely and constrained. From the outside, one thinks this fortress is strict and organized and is reforming thousands of prisoners. From the inside, the prison is falling apart. Isolation is hard to truly come by, though, if achieved, it does encourage contemplation, which, unfortunately, does not necessarily encourage reform. I cannot imagine the games the mind must play when it only has itself for company.
A Patchwork of Eastern State
People here visiting with curiosity, with awe for the idea of penitentiary, don’t know how the inmates’ lives were here. It was not a luxury to live in it, to be confined to your thoughts. It is still in no better condition than it was when he was alive, but now that the context has changed, it is looked on with more reverence than it deserves. It is still very much the same; it is harsh and unforgiving. Even the building itself is decaying, like all these past objects have the structure of enclosure and abuse and falling. These walls that used to be crisp white are falling down, the whole structure of the building is decaying. It has all passed. But I could feel the misery and insanity of these places and it was suffocating. ESP is a decaying island that stands as a reminder of the suffering it caused.
reflection on Eastern state
It is thought that Eastern state will be a new kind of prison, one where the prisoners will spend time alone to contemplate their action, and learn to reform their ways. However, from the outside, one thinks this fortress is strict and organized and is reforming thousands of prisoners. From the inside, the prison is falling apart. Things are no longer so organized and officials are doing what they can to keep prisoners under control.
So, to some extent, the reform failed. However, when I visited Eastern state, I had been truly alone that I would have gone crazy like some of the prisoners did, but the people walking by distracted me enough that I could be okay being in the cell--any less than that and I could see how the Quakers expected contemplation on the prisoners’ lives.
Eastern State Draft
But I could feel the misery and insanity of this place and it was suffocating. It's only a place which made people want to keep away from. Eastern State Penitatiary seemed like a place to cause someone to go mad rather than teach them to reflect.
I see how everyone lived and cannot imagine how they managed to stay alive—the conditions this place holds serves to no ones sustainability to survive. Eastern State Penitentiary now looks the way it made the prisoners feel: empty, broken, and alone. The endless and repeating days are terrible. For prisoners inside, it’s not much different: no freedom, isolated, frustrating, desperate and somehow made the lonely people more aggressive. It seems prisoners became more like objects to be placed somewhere than people who needed reforming.
It is ridiculous and useless. Why are these visitors visiting?
Eastern State Collage Essay
Eastern state will be a new kind of prison, one where the prisoners will spend time alone to contemplate their action, and learn to reform their ways. ESP was a place where they believed prisoners in solidarity would be able to repent for their sins, so that upon their release they would live more wholesome lives. The idea of reforming prisoners rather than just locking them up was revolutionary and enlightening, even though it tended not to work in the practices Eastern State used.
Solitary confinement was not a situation to be accepted without a fight. From the POV of Samuel Brewster, "Eastern State cannot change me or control me, the “new prison” is just like all the rest and I will defeat it." He had to be uncooperative to give himself something to do. It is a place where prisoners try to fight against isolation, which is meant by the builders in order to make the inmates contemplate and reflect towards reformation. Prisoner’s lack of communication and isolation did not aid in improvement but rather inspired rebellion.
Eastern State Draft
Eastern State may have been founded on a good idea- not writing prisoners off as worthless unchangeable criminals but trying to help them be better people- but the methods did not work and were inhumane. The idea of reforming prisoners rather than just looking them up was revolutionary and enlightening, even though it tended not to work in the practices Eastern State used. ESP was a place that stripped people of what made them human, and prevented people from performing acts that keep people sane. It could almost be seen as a method of torture, where instead of helping people as the founders had hoped, it took away every liberty a person has.
The original design of Eastern state forced people to really look into themselves and their actions, alone in a cell with nothing to do but explore your own mind allows a person to form a new perspective on themself. 5 years of no contact with the outside world, apart from that obnoxious preacher and the occasional guard. Constant, unending boredom, or the constant threat of discovery and punishments if attempts to alleviate that boredom were discovered. Eastern State is truly unlike the other prisons today, prisoners must face perhaps the strongest punishment of our time, solitude. Eastern State was a lonely, maddeningly quiet and boring cell, and unproductive waste of his time. The solitary confinement was not going to make him a better person, it would just drive him mad. He had to be uncooperative to give himself something to do.
Eastern State was more torture or prison than reform center.
Eastern State was a prison unlike any other, where the methods were so damaging to the human spirit, and was so radical that the fascination that came with the prison was far greater than the suffering. The prison was a site of mental torture, inconceivably harsh to anyone who had not seen it with his own eyes. It is a place where prisoners try to fight against isolation. Eastern State is truly unlike the other prisons today; prisoners must face perhaps the strongest punishment of our time, solitude. ESP was a place you wouldn’t want to end up in lest you enjoyed the company of your own criminal soul and the judging eye of god.
Does it really do anything for reform and penitence? Who rules the prison, the guard or the prisoners, comes into question. Most prisoners have no ability to read and spend their time (which is what they got) in trying to communicate with their neighbors.
The morals of Eastern State are questionable, and the role of success of reforming prisoners (rather than simply punishing them) is disappointingly low for how many people were forced to stay there. ESP was a place that stripped people of what made them human, and prevented people from performing acts that keep people sane. It could almost be seen as a method of torture, where instead of helping people as the founders had hoped, it took away every liberty a person has.
Eastern State Mosaic Essay
Eastern state penitentiary is an exemplary pioneer in the pursuit of reforming prisoners through isolation. Eastern state was a place for prisoners to come to terms with what they’d done, and to pray in solitude for forgiveness. It should work [be]cause the nature of human beings is kindness, so as long as they stay alone and contemplate, they will eventually find the way to their true heart. Upon their release they would live more wholesome lives.
Eastern State was more torture or prison than reform center. Eastern State tried to mentally break me down with silence and darkness. Eastern State Penitentiary is an unusual prison where inmates rarely have the chance to communicate with others, which makes me try to find ways to talk to other inmates more. Solitary confinement was not a situation to be accepted without a fight. Eastern State was an eerie place, not necessarily having the effects on its prisoners it hoped to. It is a place where prisoners try to fight against isolation, which is meant by the builders in order to make the inmates contemplate and reflect towards reformation. The prison would seem useless-does it really do anything for reform and penitence? The methods were so damaging to the human spirit.
Conflict of silences.
A place of aesthetic beauty from outside. A place of silence and regret from inside. Eastern State Penitentiary now looks the way it made the prisoners feel: empty, broken, and alone. These wall that used to be crisp white are falling down, the whole structure of the building is decaying. It has all passed. ESP is a decaying island that stands as a reminder of the suffering it caused. When I finally stepped out of Eastern State Penitatiary, back in the sun and back to freedom, I heard crowds talking incessantly and I felt like a cell myself. But I could feel the misery and insanity of these place and it was suffocating. With all the daily introspection on my crimes,I know I would have gone crazy within the first week.
The original idea of build such prison is good. But the truth is, it overlook the prisoners' crazy behavior. I see the overcrowding, the understaffing as a complete disregard for the ideals of this place. Like all the others, it ended up a very expensive storage areas for criminals. It's only a place which made people want to keep away from. These two things (great conditions and to be pentitent) are irrelevant, and may lead people to thinking committing a crime isn't a big deal, because prison isn't too bad anyway. Small sense of satisfaction that it failed because of its unrealistic goals. It seems prisoners became more like objects to be placed somewhere...
What's black and white and read all over? This first draft. (ESP Essay)
Conflict of silences. A place of aesthetic beauty from outside. A place of silence and regret from inside. Gone are the tiny insanity-inspiring chambers, replaced by shared-chambers capable of providing a life to their inhabitants. It was not a luxury to live in it, to be confined to your thoughts. It was corrupted over the years not by loose morals and flagging ideals but by the sheer pressure of numbers. It seems prisoners became more like objects to be placed somewhere than people who needed reforming.
These wall that used to be crisp white are falling down, the whole structure of the building is decaying. It has all passed. It is still in no better condition that it was when he was alive, but now that the context has changed, it is looked on with more reverence than it deserves. No matter, Eastern State as it is now, a true institution of learning, is the best form of itself that has ever been and undoubtedly could ever be.
ESP Essay
Eastern state will be a new kind of prison, one where the prisoners will spend time alone to contemplate their action, and learn to reform their ways. Eastern State is a marvel of prison technology. Heating and plumbing systems for each cell, a design that absolutely minimizes contact with other prisoners-while there is debate on whether it does what it set out to do, there is no doubt it is a far better prison than any other in America, or even the world. Eastern state penitentiary is an exemplary pioneer in the pursuit of reforming prisoners through isolation. It should work cause the nature of human beings is kindness, so as long as they stay alone and contemplate, they will eventually find the way to their true heart. Isolation is hard to truly come by, though, if achieved, it does encourage contemplation.
From POV of a Quaker (Anne's Session)
It was corrupted over the years not by loose morals and flagging ideals but by the sheer pressure of numbers.
It's easy for one to think over and reform and contemplate.
Everyone has some good in them and given the opportunity to reflect on their wrong doings in the penitentary they could rediscover the good.
Cleansing of the desire see and behave criminally for no one can dispute God's rules.
I see the overcrowding, the understaffing as a complete disregard for the ideals of this place.
Today, it stands as a symbol of our dashed hopes.
A place of aesthetic beauty from outside. A place of silence and regret from inside.
Eastern State Penetentiary is the humane and right way to reform criminals.
From the point of view of a Quaker visionary, Esp was a failed excercise in penance and reform.
To give inmates a chance to do contemplation, to think, to reform themselves.
A dream that one point lived on but now has closed to face a new era. Dissapointment.
Although there was some subversion where the inmates talked to eachother, the majority of inmates time must have been solitary and the very fact that they where in a prison, must have made them think what it was that got them here.
No cruel punishment so as not to make them feel hated or unaccepted by the society, so that they could return to the society and be decent citizens.
Anne's section: POV 5
With all the daily introspection on my crimes,I know I would have gone crazy within the first week.
The isolation is the punishment actually in this place.I cannot imagine if I stay in such place day by day without talking.
I see a complete disregard for the humanity of the prisoners.
When I finally stepped out of Eastern State Penitatiary,back in the sun and back to freedom,I heard crowds talking incessantly and I fely like a cell myself.
I am bored this doesn't hold my attention either.
Conflict of silences.
I wondered,if like her,prisoners tried to imagine,but found themselves too busy making shoes(or other commodities)or too disconnected from the world to daydream about another,maybe better,life.
"Stable ruins" seems oxymoroniz because time conhnces(?) even now to weak have in the aging place.
But I could feel the misery and insanity of these place and it was suffocating.
It seems prisoners became more like objects to be placed somewhere than people who needed reforming.
It's only a place which made people want to keep away from.
Eastern State Penitatiary seemed more like a place to cause someone to go mad rather than teach them to reflect.
Imagining myself staying there for years, I only saw a numb me, or the me who suicide.
(Mark's Section) POV 2: Samuel Bruester, who was sentenced to solitary for five years
Eastern State was more torture or prison than reform center. 5 years of no contact with the outside world, apart from that obnoxious preacher and the occasional guard. Constant, unending boredom, or the constant threat of discovery and punishments if attempts to alleviate that boredom were discovered.
Life would seem scarily smaller, with low outlook on life, and the only hope for change relies on people coming by
“I am mad and eager to get out. I’d never be bad and have been cured by myself. Why [do] I have to stay here!”
It is funny to create the way to communicate with my buddies and neighbors. There’s no way for them to force me to welcome insolation.
Easter State tried to mentally break me down with silence and darkness.
Eastern State was a lonely, maddeningly quiet and boring cell, and unproductive waste of his time.
Eastern State Penitentiary is an unusual prison where inmates rarely have the chance to communicate with others, which makes me try to find ways to talk to other inmates more.
From the POV of Samuel Bruster, an uncooperative prisoner sentenced to five years of solitary confinement, ESP is a place where if you follow the rules and life a life in solidarity, it will drive you mad, as these conditions are not humane.
Eastern State cannot change me or control me, the “new prison” is just like all the rest and I will defeat it.
Thomas Roe's POV
The communal spaces and open water could only do so much to cleanse the place of its past.
Surely at this point any visitor entering the penitentiary, as one would enter a museum, would not be met with _???_* but a faint vibe, reminiscent of the true horrific conditions of this institution.
No matter, Eastern State as it is now, a true institution of learning, is the best form of itself that has ever been and undoubtedly could ever be.
I see the ultimate failure of what could have been and excellent way to reform prisoners.
I see how everyone lived and cannot imagine how they managed to stay alive—the conditions this place holds serves to no ones sustainability to survive.
Communication can’t be stopped.
Eastern State Penitentiary now looks the way it made the prisoners feel: empty, broken, and alone.
People here visiting with curiosity, with awe for the idea of penitentiary, don’t know how the inmates’ lives here were.
It is still in no better condition that it was when he was alive, but now that the context has changed, it is looked on with more reverence than it deserves.
It is very much the same; it is harsh and unforgiving.
Even the building itself is decaying, like all these past objects have the structure of enclosure and abuse and falling.
Mark's section: 1.From the P.O.V of one of Quaker reformers
From the P.O.V of one of Quaker reformers:
Eastern state was a place for prisoners to come to terms with what they’d done, and to pray in solitude for forgiveness.
Eastern state penitentiary is an exemplary pioneer in the pursuit of reforming prisoners through isolation.
The idea of reforming prisoners rather than just looking them up was revolutionary and enlightening, even though it tended not to work in the practices Eastern State used.
It should work cause the nature of human beings is kindness, so as long as they stay alone and contemplate, they will eventually find the way to their true heart.
Eastern state penitentiary was for the most part a failure: prisoners found ways to communicate and rebel, and often played or refused the help of their reformers.
ESP was a place where they believed prisoners in solidarity would be able to repent for their sins, so that upon their release they would live more wholesome lives.
Eastern state provided prisoners with ample time and silence to think over their wrong doings, confess and improve themselves.
Eastern state Pen was efficient in providing an isolated environment for convicts to think about their wrongdoings and give penance.
I am disappointed by the loss of the original mission statement (now they lost the part about isolation), but proud of how it affected other prisons throughout the world.
POV 2【Anne's Section】: From the Point of View of Samuel Brewster
“Flawed from the start.”
“ESP is a decaying island that stands as a reminder of the suffering it caused.”
“I see this place the same way I saw it years ago: broken, cold, and useless.”
“Far more strict and penalizing than how it is now. Happy it doesn’t exist anymore.”
“Small sense of satisfaction that it failed because of its unrealistic goals.”
“It was not a luxury to live in it, to be confined to your thoughts.”
“Gone are the tiny insanity-inspiring chambers, replaced by shared-chambers capable of providing a life to their inhabitants.”
“The endless and repeating days are terrible.”
“But sitting here for 5 years, isolated, dark, lonely, I really want real life.”
“These wall that used to be crisp white are falling down, the whole structure of the building is decaying. It has all passed.”
“For prisoners inside, it’s not much different: no freedom, isolated, frustrating, desperate and somehow made the lonely people more aggressive.”
“It is very much the same; It is broken and not useful.”
“It is ridiculous and useless. Why are these visitors visiting?”
If I get any words wrong, can you comment to it so that every one else can see?:)