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Icy Pond
Submitted by alesnick on Fri, 03/01/2013 - 8:33pm
In the middle
In the mud
Winter stillness is
A canny
Animating melt
Dozing open
-- Alice Lesnick
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In The Middle
This is a lovely little poem. You use assonance very effectively in the first half of the poem where the soft "i" sound is repeated. In the second half of the poem, I see two separate uses of assonance. In lines 5 and 6 there is repetition of the "an" sound. In the same lines, the long "a" sound is also repeated. The long "o" sounds in the final line tie together the uncommon combination of the words dozing open. I'm curious about the transition between the first and second halves of the poem from short vowel sounds to long ones. Was this intention?