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Response to winterprincess

Sydney's picture

Virushi, I think that the idea of your thesis can be supported easily. If you go into detail with this quote, then I think you could find some good support: ‘You know. You were there. I got knocked up by Elliot. I had an abortion. Lloyd hit me…’ (p.241)

I like that your first and third quotes are kind of opposites of each other. In the first, Yumi feels different and isolated. In the third, it’s Cass who feels that way.

Also, I like your second quote, but I don’t necessarily see how it supports the thesis. Hopefully tomorrow we can help you figure out how you can work it into your paper.